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Feb Main新生指南——选课篇

        今天Meeloun小编给墨大预科留学生分享选课指南,码住!

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        Trinity的课程设置:

        3门必修+3门选修+EAP

        必修课程: Hoi,Lit,Drama

        选修课程:Acc,Bio, Che, Eco,M1,M2,Psy,Phy,ED&D,M&C

        必修课程介绍:

        Hoi (History of ideas)历史:西方历史思想。从古希腊谈到近现代。文科生应该很熟悉。Lecture 讲述每个时代的思想,Tutorial上讨论大家的Idea,一定要发言,不然回扣出勤分。Assignment以写Essay为主,需要大量得阅读老师给的资料。写Essay的时候主动去找老师讨论+修改,可能比自己看一天还有用。

        Lit(Literature)文学:分为诗歌,微小说,短片小说,莎士比亚戏剧四个主题。每个主题根据所学的写一篇分析的Essay,也会有presentation。写Essay的时候抓住自己的Tutor喜欢的点,越有希望拿高分。

        Drama 表演:学习基础的表演技巧。默剧+独角戏+2个小组共同排练的戏剧。 很有趣的一门课,刚开始可能放不开,但熟悉同学老师之后放开去演,分数会打的很高。也是学姐毕业后最怀念的一门课。

        *文学和表演在计算分数的时候统归为English,其中文学占70%,表演占30%

        EAP (English for Academic Purposes)学术英语:主要学的是如何写essay还有如何reference. EAP是必修课而且要确保出勤率(不然EAP老师会报告给学校…)EAP没有大课,每周两节小课. 小课就是写写essay或者是别的活动,会教不同的方法reference,怎样引入别人的观点。 EAP学的好的话,对HOI和LIT都会有很大的帮助

        *进入本科的分数线为50,EAP不作为Best 4计入总成绩

        选修课程:

        Accounting 会计:商科强推,容易拿分。学习如何分类各项账款及不同企业的运营方式及利润分配。Lecturer Mary讲得很好,前5节课千万别翘课,否则后续可能跟不上。每周的作业要记得写,否则也会扣Participation的分数。一共有3篇report和2个考试,report基本上属于送分,考试的学姐会举行考前押题讲座,押题很准的,考试也不会坑人,全程都有Notes提供给大家。Tutor里Wendy是中国人,下课如果实在没明白可以偷偷用中文问。Felipe等其他老师都很好的,很负责。

        Biology 生物:Bio一般都是选Science或者是biomed的学生会选. 生物相比较数学心理来说信息量比较大. 会有好多好多专有名词但是老师会给一个词汇表上面有中文所以不用太担心. 主题主要是动物植物细胞然后会讲光合作用呼吸作用.国内没有学过生物的同学可能会困惑. 每周是一节大课一节小课. 小课会讲ppt上的题然后过知识点.
        然后每两周有实验课. 实验课每次三个小时. 还是比较累的,但是实验桌的老师很有耐心会确保你每一步都做得对. 然后下半学期可能会解剖东西. 作业一般都是实验的报告,一边做实验一遍就可以写完下课之前可以交,如果实在写不完课可以带回家写,然后坐在你旁边的小朋友会是你整个学期的lab partner

        Chemistry 化学:是Biomedicine的必修学科,每周两节lecture,学习的内容较多,而且前期的学习内容与之后的相辅相成,因此要在前期打好基础,在后期灵活运用。Lecturer Brendan讲得很详细,举的例子贴切实际,且辅以视频教学。每次的作业都会检查记participation,所以都要记得做,而且作业是巩固知识复习的好帮手。化学科的老师都很耐心的解答,有什么问题大胆去问就好啦。

        Physics 物理 :Semester 1 内容为物理单位,向量,力学,波; Semester 2为电学 电磁学,光学(光电效应)和原子物理。(注:具体情况可能会有调整)每个学期会有6次实验课(2周一次,每次3个小时)取其中分数的best 5计算均值计入总分。没有期中考试,每个学期会有一个占2.5%的assignment, 每个期末会有占35%的考试,主要是根据本学期的内容出题(可以参考past paper)。大部分内容和国内高中教学重合,如果有基础建议学习这门课。考前建议多刷往届题目并弄懂(题型部分类似)。

        Economics 经济:商科建议学,包含了几乎所有大一所需的经济知识。 上学期微观,下学期宏观。适合文科生学习,考试基本以背诵理解为主,基本无计算。之前都是3场考试,第一场40道选择占10%,第二场全部简答题占20%,最后final综合,占60%。但据说今年会增加个Report. Lecturer Vandana讲得很好,即使有印度口音,若Vandana当Tutor则强推这门课,其他老师应该是新招的,水平不大清楚。若很喜欢经济,可以学,对于商科属很实用的学科。

essay不会写?写作宝典奉上!

        essay到底应该怎么写?为什么很多留学生写的essay用了很多高级词汇,还是个C, 而隔壁老王用的词汇是小学生都认识的,却是个A?导致同学们后面完成essay写作时看到题目,脑子里一篇空白。别担心,不仅仅只有你一个人有问题,你的同学也有很多不了解的!为了解决同学们的问题,Meeloun小编精选了几本essay 写作宝典!同学们可根据自身的实际水平选择参考,

        基础扫盲款

essay写作

        On Writing Well

        这本书对各种题材的写作做了全面的扫盲,包含采访、游记、传记、科学科技、日常工作、体育、文艺批评和评论等。作者还提供了他作为一名作家对写作自身的观察和思考。我们拿英文Email的写作来举一个例子,在写英文Email时,不仅要注意语法词汇的应用是否正确得体,还需要注意给不同收件人时达到的效果。在business writing 课程里面,会有专门的部分是让你以boss, manager, customer和supervisor的身份来讲述同一件事情, 那个时候你就能体会到“一人分饰几角”的酸爽啦 !

        基础高配版

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        The Elements of Style

        The Elements of Style是各大北美高校人文学科课堂上的必备书籍,也逐渐成为每一个出国留学者必备的英文写作指南。

        这本书阐述的英文写作必须满足的基本原则和常见的错误。书中包括8个“基本使用规则”,10个“创作的基本原则”,“一些形式的问题”,一个包含49个易误用的单词和表达,57个易拼错的单词的列表,对于学习英语写作的学生来说非常实用。

        进阶版

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        Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer

        这也是一本将写作技巧拆成单元来讲解的书。虽然书名叫做写作工具,但是每一个章节都相对独立,是围绕某一个英文essay写作技巧而设计的workshop。全书分为四个板块,nuts and bolts (英语写作的基本元素,词语、句子、段落的技巧);special effects (让文章简练、清晰、有说服力的技巧);blue prints (文章整体构思和结构);useful habits (如何养成良好的英文写作习惯)。

        本书作者Roy Peter Clark是一个具有丰富教学经验的作家。这本书浓缩了他数十年以来的教学经验,并且大量地从文学作品中援引了超过200个以上的例子,将其转化为50项写作技巧。

        看到这里,相信你的装备已经不少啦!辣么,可以拿出拖延了一个星期的作业来开始做了么?如果是时间问题的话,同学们可以找我们Meeloun的essay代写服务哦!美伦现旗下写手超过400名,海龟硕博占据50%以上,更多写手资源正在火热招募中。美伦以质量为根本,诚信服务,严格执行双重审稿与检测,保证每一篇稿子都是精心原创并符合学科的需求,保障了留学生论文作业的通过率。

英国Essay代写范文–英国大气污染的防治

        下面Meeloun小编为大家整理一篇优秀的essay代写范文- Prevention and control of air pollution in Britain,供大家参考学习,这篇论文讨论了英国大气污染的防治。1952年发生的伦敦烟雾事件,是英国20世纪十大环境公害事件之一。自此之后,英国政府通过完善相关法制、强化公众参与、重视经济手段构建出一个具有鲜明特色的英国大气污染防治模式,有效地改善了环境空气质量。英国大气环境相关法律不仅体系完备,且范围广泛,涵盖了大气污染和尾气排放的方方面面。

        The 1952 London smog incident was one of the top 10 environmental hazards of the 20th century. Since then, the British government has effectively improved the environmental air quality by improving relevant legal system, strengthening public participation and emphasizing economic means to construct a distinctive British air pollution prevention model.

        Britain is the first industrialized country in the world and also the first country to encounter environmental pollution incidents. In the 1950s, due to industrial production and residents living in London burning a large amount of coal and excessive emission of soot, the “London smog event” shocked the world, resulting in tens of thousands of deaths due to respiratory diseases, making this event one of the top 10 environmental pollution events in the 20th century. Since then, the British government from these mistakes and by taking effective measures to control the coal combustion, reducing emissions, now the air pollution has been brought under effective control, environment quality has been fundamental to improve, but also accumulated a lot of experience of the prevention and control of atmospheric pollution, these experiences and lessons for guangdong governance haze weather brings a lot of enlightenment and reference.

        After the London smog incident, the British government attached great importance to legislation to solve the problem of air pollution. Similar to China, the UK also adopted “terminal treatment” to deal with air pollution in the early stage. The city of London act was introduced in 1954 to control smog emissions. In 1956, the Clean Air Act, the world’s first air pollution prevention and control act, was enacted, spreading the London governance model to the whole country. The law on industrial environmental health and safety stipulates that all polluting enterprises must take effective measures to prevent poisonous gases from being discharged into the atmosphere, or be severely punished. The air pollution control act provides for the right of the public to complain about environmental quality and limits on sulphur content in industrial fuels. These measures have effectively reduced soot and sulfur dioxide pollution from coal burning. In the 1970s, traffic pollution replaced industrial pollution as the primary threat to London’s air quality. Therefore, the government introduced a series of measures, including prioritizing the development of public transport, curbing the number of private cars and reducing vehicle exhaust emissions, to seek to improve the city’s air quality. In the 1990 s, the British began to seek to improve air environmental quality comprehensive measures, introduced the road vehicle lass, the Clean Air Act, the environmental law, the greater London government act, the pollution prevention and control act, and the climate change act, and a series of air pollution prevention and control act, to strict constraints of other emissions, setting clear penalties, to control the air pollution. At the same time, according to the environmental law issued in 1995, the UK began to formulate a national air quality strategy, stipulating that all cities should carry out air quality evaluation and review. For areas that fail to meet the standard, the government must set aside an air quality management area and force them to meet the standard within a specified period. Britain then suggested action plan for energy efficiency: the government, “the climate change action plan”, “the sustainable development strategy”, “low carbon building plan”, “tax and subsidy scheme”, “the British energy efficiency action plan 2007”, the national renewable energy plan, and the low carbon transition plan and a series of plans and policy, actively improve the air environmental quality.

        The UK’s air environment laws are comprehensive and wide-ranging, covering all aspects of air pollution and emissions. It can be said that the process of air pollution control in the UK is a process of constant revision and improvement of relevant laws and regulations.

        British citizens have a deep tradition of autonomy and strong social roots in the discussion, decision-making, supervision and implementation of environmental issues. The UK pays attention to protecting the public’s right to know about the environment through legislation, and is the first country to inform the public of the real-time information of air governance. The official network publishes real-time air quality data for the London area, as well as hourly concentrations and weekly trends for individual pollutants. Nor is there an official monopoly on the way British citizens receive information about the air. Citizens can request data directly from government environmental agencies under the freedom of information act and should not be denied access. The government’s UK air quality archive website and the London air quality network, a collaboration between civil society organisations and the king’s college London environmental group, publish real-time air quality data for the London area. The government will never dare to accuse non-governmental monitoring organizations of being “illegal”, “illegal” or “unscientific”.

        The UK not only attaches importance to achieving the goal of environmental governance through mandatory laws, but also attaches importance to promoting voluntary emission reduction by enterprises through economic means. Economic means to emphasize “who pollution, who management, who spend money”, besides can increase government financial income and economic measures compared to the traditional administrative commands have continuous stimulation effect, through the internalization of environment cost, encourage people to adopt a more effective way to reduce environmental pollution, reduce pollutant amount, gradually formed voluntary governance reducing the pollution of the environment. Since the 1970s, the British government began to reduce the cost of environmental governance and improve the efficiency of environmental governance by levying environmental taxes, trading emission rights and introducing preferential tax policies. As a means of economic intervention, fiscal and taxation measures have obvious effects on improving the environmental quality of Britain.

        Science and technology have played a key guiding role in Britain’s fight against air pollution. The British government encourages enterprises to adopt the air pollution control technology to reform the production process, giving priority to the non-pollution or less pollution process, which is the fundamental way to prevent and control the air pollution. At the government level, the government actively organizes, guides and enterprises to adopt advanced production techniques. Through economic means to promote the voluntary adoption of advanced technology emission reduction enterprises to achieve internalization of environmental costs; By means of public participation and social incentives, enterprises are forced to eliminate outdated technologies and actively adopt better emission reduction technologies.

Monash留学生不能不知道的实用网址!

        论如何快速成为老司机——

        这些网站你不能不知道!

        嘿嘿

        Monash学生必知的网址

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        图书馆

        官网: https://www.monash.edu/library

        数据库:http://guides.lib.monash.edu/subject-databases

        技巧:https://www.monash.edu/rlo/research-writing-assignments

        图书馆应该是每位学生最有力的学习助手了吧。每每临近考试都是一位难求,不过如果用不到馆内设施,还可以多多利用网上资源呀。在图书馆的官网上,你可以看到丰富的资源和信息,还有不少与学习有关的小技巧。初到国外留学的同学们,如果想尽快适应本地的教育氛围,通过学习图书馆提供的学习技巧是一个不错的方法。

        比如:Reading and note taking —

        https://www.monash.edu/rlo/study-skills/reading-and-note-taking

        另外,大家还可以直接预约图书馆的房间哦,适合3人以上组团学习,这样就不用担心去的晚而找不到座位啦

        http://monash.libcal.com/booking

        寒/暑假课程

        https://www.monash.edu/enrolments/processes/summer-winter/faculty

        如果假期想要更充实的话,可以提前了解一下学校提供的假期课程。不仅可以修到学分,还能在假期也持续自我充电,保持输入。假期后开学也可以快速回到学习状态哦~

        语言辅导

        官网:https://www.monash.edu/english-connect

        这是一个互动式的语言项目,由经过训练的学生与参加者一起练习英语,可以说是多功能英语角。这里的项目主要包括说和写两个方面,对于需要做presentation和交essay/report的同学有一定的帮助。

        机房的off-hour通行许可

        网址:https://locate-a-lab.apps.monash.edu

        对于一些专业,比如设计、建筑、IT等,如果在off-hour也想要使用学校机房的电脑来做assignment的话,只要在这个网址上开通学生卡的通行权就可以刷卡进入啦。非常简单!

        使用学校打印机

        https://web-print.monash.edu/app

        学校教学楼和图书馆都分布着打印机,非常便利。想要使用的话,一种方法是通过学校的电脑,直接点击打印即可;另外如果想用自己的电脑连接打印机,则需要通过上面的链接提交想打印的文件。然后只要到离自己最近的任意打印机,刷卡或者输入学生账号与密码,就可以打印啦。

        志愿者

        官网:https://www.monash.edu/volunteer

        如果你希望成为一名志愿者,想要通过参与志愿者活动更快融入本地生活,不妨看一看这里。也许你就能碰到感兴趣的项目!大胆地试一下吧,成为一名志愿者不仅能够帮助他人,还可以增长自己的阅历,也为简历添上明亮的一笔。

美国本土学生申请essay范文分享

        跟着美国人学申请essay写作最大的好处是,我们无论如何不可能比美国本土的人更了解美国大学,更了解美国大学的要求,更了解美国大学的文化,更了解美国大学的录取的“潜规则”!

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申请essay写作

        就比如美研申请中的个人陈述,你翻遍所有的美国大学的官网,你会发现一个问题,在国内叫的最多的“个人陈述”,在美国大学的官网上会有不同的叫法,见得最多的是“Personal Statement”,但你也会看到“Letter of Intent”,或者“Statement of Purpose”,在严谨的美国人看来,这些是不同的,虽然他们写作的内容上会有类似的地方,但essay写作要求和essay格式会有很大的不同,作用也有一些差别。

        下面Meeloun小编就和同学们一起看看美国人是如何写作一份完美的申请essay写作的!

        Graduate school applications often require a letter of intent, personal statement, or similar essay. These may highlight your personality, interests, accomplishments, and goals, as they relate to what you want to study and why you want to attend that school to do it.

        Writing a personal statement for grad school could be one of your biggest opportunities. You can use it to show the school who you are and why they should consider your application. Because it’s something of a first impression, it’s important to make sure your essay is thought out, well organized, and well written. Here are some tips for creating a standout application essay or letter of intent for graduate school.

        What Is the Difference Between a Letter of Intent and Personal Statement?

        The first step in writing an effective application essay is identifying exactly what you’re meant to be writing. Is your application asking you for a letter of intent, a personal statement, or a statement of purpose? Or are they asking for more than one of these? The basic content of each option is similar. They all talk about your intention to study at that school, and why you might be a good fit. Despite these similarities, there are some key differences which should guide your approach to composing them.

        Letter of Intent: A letter of intent, or letter of interest, is like a cover letter. It’s a formal letter, ideally addressed to the decision-maker regarding your application. The goal of a letter of intent for graduate school is to provide an overview of your goals in applying, highlights of your experience, and why you’d be a good fit. You’d probably also want to close with a call to action.

        Graduate Personal Statement: Rather than a letter, a personal statement for graduate school is an essay. It’s intended to show who you are as a person, your personal and academic goals, and why you might be a good fit for the program. An important distinction here is “who you are as a person.” Personal statements should speak to what you want to study and why. But you’ll probably want to frame it as a personal narrative that helps the reader get to know you as an individual.

        Statement of Purpose: The biggest difference between a statement of purpose and a personal statement is the intent. While also an essay, a statement of purpose generally focuses specifically on your reasons for applying to a program. The content should focus on the program itself and the specific achievements and experience that make you a good candidate. A statement of purpose could also be known as a graduate school statement of intent, a goal statement for graduate school, or an academic goals essay.

        While some programs may only ask for one of these pieces, it’s possible that your selected school might want a few of them. If you’re asked for a personal statement and a statement of purpose, it’s important to think what makes each one different. One strategy to make it a little easier could be to delineate between your “personal” and “academic” achievements. For example, you could write your statement of purpose about the academic and professional experience that makes you a good candidate for that program. Your personal statement might focus on the personal experiences that shaped your character, and led you to choosing that field and that school.

        Getting Ready To Write Your Graduate School Application Essay

        When you’re getting ready to write your personal essay, you will first need to think about a few key points.

        1、Your Purpose in Writing Your Essay

        In other words, what are you trying to tell your reader about yourself and your goals? Make sure you have a clear message.

        2、What You Want to Say

        Think about the kinds of details, or the type of story you want to tell to achieve your purpose. Do you have a specific experience you want to describe, or certain achievements you need to share? How do these details support your message?

        3、The Style You’ll Use to Write It

        Sometimes, schools might look for a certain style of writing, such as a scholarly voice. However, in other cases, you might have a little bit of wiggle room. This is your chance to show your target school that you’re a competent, engaging writer with personality. Thinking about your strategy in advance could help you do that.

        All of this should be informed by the particular school you’re writing the essay for. So before you begin, be sure to read the essay requirements carefully, and research the school and the program in question.

        Formatting Your Personal Statement for Graduate School

        Thinking about how you’ll structure your essay early on could be an advantage when it comes to writing and revising. One good way to do this could be by drafting an outline of your ideas. By doing this, you could make sure your ideas are organized effectively, and see how it all fits together, even before you start writing.

        Chances are you learned the basics of essay structure in high school. But in case you’re out of practice—for example, if you spent the last few years knee deep in math or computer science—here’s a refresher.(划重点:比较搞笑,中美如此的相似,高中议论文的写作结构在这里可以用到)

        Introduction

        Anywhere from a sentence to a paragraph, the introduction creates context for the reader. Generally speaking, it should provide an overview of the topics you’ll be discussing. But, depending upon the style of your essay, it could also serve as a dramatic lead-in, setting the stage for a story you’ll be telling..

        Body

        The body of personal statement, will likely consist of two to four paragraphs. These paragraphs should be sequenced logically – one should naturally flow from the next – and contain the bulk of the essay’s important information. Usually, these paragraphs will begin with a “topic sentence” summarizing the paragraph’s content, but again that may not apply if your statement has a more narrative style.

        Conclusion

        Rather than introducing new ideas or supportive arguments, the conclusion is where you tie it all together. Close out your essay by making clear what your argument is and what you want the reader to take away from it.

        If you’re writing a letter of intent, the above should still apply. However, you’ll need to do this as a formal letter. That should include a header containing the date, the recipient’s name and address, your name and address, and a salutation, as well as a closing and signature.

        How Long Should a Personal Statement for Graduate School Be?

        While every school will have its own requirements, generally a personal statement should fall between 250 and 750 words. This is roughly one half to one full page.

        First, double check to see if the school provides specific guidelines. If they don’t, then try to be as clear and succinct as possible while still answering the question. Does your personal statement cover all the key points? Is it clear what you are trying to say? Did you repeat yourself? If your answers are yes, yes and student, personal statement for graduate schoolno, then your personal essay is likely the right length.

        Writing Style For Your Personal Statement(划重点:个性化很重要)

        In addition to telling the school about yourself and your goals, a personal essay demonstrates your writing ability to your school. As such, you’ll want to put your best foot forward with an effective writing style. Here are some tips to consider while you write.

        Strike a balance between personal and professional.

        You might be talking about yourself, but you’re also writing to a graduate school, so it’s important to show that you can write formally. Try and be direct, clear, and organized, to help your reader follow easily. Don’t stray from your topic, and watch your grammar and punctuation! That said, this essay is about you, so don’t be afraid to write in first person.(划重点:第一人称写作)

        Be engaging.

        Keep your reader interested through your style choices. For example, sticking with active verbs when possible and avoiding passive voice could help enliven your writing. Strong imagery or concrete examples could also make an impression that lasts. And using a conversational tone (but not too informal!) could help personalize it for the reader.

        Be accurate.

        You want your reader to be interested, but make sure everything you write is true! Avoid embellishing or inventing stories, and stick to facts that could be substantiated.(划重点:真实性)

        Follow the rules.

        Your school might have specific guidelines for how you write and submit your personal essay. Make sure you follow them to a tee! When in doubt, be conservative, and stick with a traditional font choice (12 pt. Times New Roman) and paper (white). Also make sure you’re spelling names correctly, and using the right credentials and terminology when talking about your target school.(划重点:字体字号以及文字背景)

        Editing Your Graduate School Application Essay

        One of the most important aspects of the writing process is revision. Don’t be surprised if this takes more than one draft to do! Many writers revise over several rounds before settling on a finished product. Here’s a brief guide on the revision process and what to look for.

        Work from big to small.

        Before worrying about individual words and sentences, make sure the big issues are covered. Start with things like your ideas, the clarity of your argument, and your overall structure and fix those first.

        Check your message.

        Think back to the beginning of this process, to the message you decided you wanted to get across. Is your essay or letter communicating that message? Is it clear? If you’re not sure, consider having somebody else read it over.

        Check your organization.

        If you started with an outline, compare your finished draft to your original outline. Is your essay organized the way you planned? If so, read through it and make sure that it makes sense and has a logical flow.

        Make sure your paragraphs make sense.

        Each paragraph should have a clear topic or message, and support for that topic. Make sure it’s clear what each paragraph is trying to say, and that each one is organized.

        Check your style.

        Double check to make sure your tone isn’t too casual. If you included any slang, for example, now is the time to remove it. Then check your sentence structure. Avoid fragments and run-on sentences, and make sure to vary your sentence structure to keep the reader engaged. Try and remove any instances of passive voice, when you can. Reading your essay aloud could be one way to catch any awkward writing you might have missed.(划重点:不要卖弄你的美语有多厉害,别让招生官更容易理解你的文字更重要)

        Fix your grammar and punctuation

        This is the last and possibly most important step. Make sure you catch any errors in grammar and punctuation. Pay careful attention to common errors, like mixing up your/you’re, and there/their/they’re. Also make sure to check your subject/verb agreement, number agreement, capitalization, and punctuation. Finally, double check spelling, especially when it comes to important names. One strategy to avoid missing anything is to read your essay backwards, starting with the final sentence. That will help force your brain to focus on each individual sentence, instead of skimming over mistakes by accident.

        Final Advice

        Writing personal statement for graduate school is only one piece of the application puzzle. But it’s more than that. It’s an opportunity to show your chosen school your writing expertise, your passion for your subject, and who you are as a person. Keep in mind what the application is asking you for and what you’re trying to tell them. Take time to edit carefully, and your essay could potentially set your application apart.

英国留学生完成essay写作时有哪些注意事项?

        英国留学生在完成essay写作前最好去了解一些需要了解的注意事项,比如时间的规划,又或者是作业的具体要求是怎样,又或是其抄袭等等等等。不要拿到题目就急冲冲的下笔或者放在一边不管。为使大家能够更加好的了解这些,Meeloun小编在这里给大家总结了英国essay写作注意事项,下面一起来看看吧!

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essay写作

        抓紧时间准备

        你应该开始努力尝试尽早完成你生活中的其他事情,为完成essay留出足够的时间去思考,去写。第一步就是要集中时间和精力全力去写essay,即使它只是完成了一个简短的封面,这样你也会觉得很有成就感。然后接下的内容也要这样去写,专心,专注。

        了解作业的要求是什么

        在写之前仔细阅读作业要求,如果你能读明白作业的要求固然便是更好。如果你不确定,然后问你的同学,你会惊奇地发现很多人都会像你一样不确定!或者问问你的指导老师,只是为了安全起见,保证自己的作业不会写偏题,这样写出来的作业就会符合题目要求。

        组织研究内容

        当你阅读和研究的课题,养成了一种习惯,注意突出写作重点。下笔的时候考虑你将如何用连贯的表达形式把这些结合起来。

        养成写草稿的习惯

        如果觉得自己语言组织方面能力不是很好,可以先把想到的内容用草稿的方式写下来,然后再慢慢试着将它们连贯起来。久了之后你会发现这个习惯会帮你解决很多麻烦。

        要有足够的证据

        你要找到足够的引用材料的来源或研究来支撑你说你在文章中提出的论点。

        千万不要抄袭

        这是国外学术界的大忌,特别是在英国。一旦发现有抄袭的嫌疑后果不堪设想。可以引用别人的内容或者文献,但是一定要在文章的reference的部分中展现出来。

        以上就是小编整理出来的关于英国essay写作的一些注意事项,希望能够帮助到大家今后更好的完成essay,争取拿高分!需要essay代写的同学可以扫描右边的二维码联系我们的客服哦!

Management期末复习技巧分享

        到了这个时候,如果你还没开始整理之前的知识点,如果你还没弄清楚key concepts的差异,点开这篇文章就对了!Meeloun小编呕心沥血的找了各种资源,为你整理了一份关于Management课程的期末复习技巧!一起来看看吧

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Management复习技巧

        Organization Behaviour

        1. 对于OB复习来说,同学们首先需要非常清楚每一个topic的框架。了解每一个topic所涉及的theory,以及该theory包含的components。建议同学们画一份Mind Map。

        2. 同学们不需要太过担心没有把全部Case背下来或者看完。这并不是复习OB的重点。重点应该focus on theory的复习。只有将所有theory里每一个知识点都理解并背熟之后,你才能知道在case中,需要寻找的关键点和答案,不然单单把case背下来也无济于事。

        3. Final考试中分为宏观(75%)微观(25%)两个大内容。根据比重,如果最后实在来不及,可以侧重于宏观知识点的复习。Lecture slides 上的所有内容都将成为考试内容,definition尤为重要,但类似关于为什么重要为什么不适用等可以相对忽略。

        Enterprise Performance Management

        1. OB和Cost management的一些基础理念会对这门的学习有很大帮助。

        2. EPM所有的知识都是起源于两大Theme。(1) Performance Measurement and control 以及(2)Planning and control。因此心中一定要知道学到的知识是如何跟每一个theme相关的。

        3. 开心也好,不开心也好。一定要把每个知识点背下来,然后再进行理解。在考试的时候是会看key points给分的,如果连点都没有,更不可能开展每一个点之后的延伸,因此理解每一个concept背后的应用非常重要。Tutorial的case study你应该是不会在考试的时候见到的,所以把lecture slides要看熟很重要!

        Cost Management

        1. CM可以算是建立在Accounting基础上的Management课程,accounting的techniques是建造这个课程的砖,也是贯穿你一个学期学习的内容。但是决定你分数,甚至决定你有没有办法pass的;则是建立在这些基础上的宏观理解能力,对公司决策的判断,对大局的把控,以及带有business sense的逻辑推断。

        2. Tutorial的问题会比Final的更难,所以不用反复做Tute Questions,更重要的是通过Tutorial 理解题型考法,以便更好的预测final考点,更好的理解书中的concepts。因为final将会是理论和计算的结合。

        3. CM这门课的每一周内容环环相扣,一旦脱节会很难跟上后面的新知识点。所以一定要提前复习,把前面不懂得知识点补起来!

Meeloun分享UOA商学士选课指南

        选课选不好,年年Final像高考。对于留学生来说,选好一门课,关乎着整个学期的幸福。下个学期老师怎么样、作业有多少、Final难不难可全部与选课有关。Meeloun小编特地为大家收集整理了一份选课指南,希望能对大家有所帮助。

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UOA选课指南

        此篇分享可能不能覆盖所有科目,如果大家在看完之后还有疑惑,欢迎大家评论指正补充!

        ACCTG101 难度:三星

        Accounting 101这门课是会计的基础,主要靠细心,吃透每一个知识点。掌握好past paper ,是accounting的基础。一个学期有五个Assignment。期中期末会各有一次考试。

        这门课相对来说比较简单,建议大家大一上学期修读。

        Stats108 难度:三星

        Stats108是一门需要理解的科目,是学概率的数学,可能一开始听的会比较懵。一个学期会有三个assignment ,第三个会耗时长,需提前规划完成,会有work example 这块不难。期中期末只考选择题,刷past paper ,不难。但是总体会比Accounting 101难一点。

        建议大家大一上学期修读。

        ECON151 难度:三星

        ECON 151是分为两部分:微观经济学和宏观经济学,课程考察偏重于对于知识的理解,而不是死记硬背或者计算。这门课有5个quiz,一篇essay和期中期末考试。相对来说难度并不大。

        建议大一上学期修读。

        BUS101& BUS102 难度:四星

        这两门课,是大家入学后遇到的让人极度抓狂的小组课。这两门课大家在之前的学习中毫无接触过的知识,且很多是阅读材料,每次上课很多时候听不懂老师在讲什么,是挂科率极其高的一门课。

        Business 101这门课,基本上是大一新生第一学期都会选的课,每周就2小时,但必须要去,都以小组的形式,期末是两篇当场写的论文。

        Business 102与business 101相同,但需要先pass101。这2门课不能挂科,不然就没法以BCom毕业。

        建议大家大一上修101,大二下修102

        COMLAW101 难度:五星

        Comlaw101这门课是大一新生的杀手课,需要double pass,一般新生很少接触过商法,所以会觉得难,以及有很多case需要背。很多同学修了两次以后才过的,有同学反映说,及时每节课都去听讲也不一定能懂,所以平时要极度重视,临时抱佛脚危险性有点大。

        建议大家在 大一或者大一下修读

        Info 难度:五星

        Info110这门课可以说是新生杀手课,听课的时候很有趣,但考试有点难,不熟悉这方面的同学会觉得考试题目很懵。不过相对于COMLAW101来说,还是比较容易拿高分的。But,千万别COMLAW101和INFOSYS 110重叠,否则会会提前秃顶。

        建议大家在 大一或者大一下修读。

        以上就是大一必修的七门。还有一门课需要修,但是不同专业选的不一样。比如说选Accounting专业的同学还要选一门ACCTG102,acctg102是Accounting和Finance专业的必修课,授课主要通过每周两节lecture和一节tutorial. Lecture可以听录音但是tutorial必须去,也建议大家好好准备tutorial的题目之后再去. 这门课总分包括25%(有可能被调整)来源于10个几乎每周一个的assignment和75%的test和exam. 每个assignment涉及到的内容建议同学们每周尽量都要跟上,不然后面堆一起复习的话就太有挑战性了. 这个课程的难度会明显比acctg101大,所以小伙伴们最好一开始的时候就尽快进入状态,不然Glenn可不等人的。

        Finance专业的同学还有一门那就要选Maths108,这门课会会比较简单,主要是学了一下我们在国内的初高中数学,对大家来说问题不大的。

        以上就是Meeloun小编给新生们分享的选课指南了,同学们可以参考一下哦!对于各类留学作业完成有困难的同学可以扫描右边的二维码联系我们的客服!

高分Research Paper写作四步走

        许多国内高中生初进入美国大学时,感觉在论文写作方面存在一些困难,这是因为中美高中生在写作锻炼方面存在一定的差异:国内高中生在阶段学习时主要完成形式较固定的命题作文,美国高中生则需要完成一些比较具有研究性质的论文。

        美国高中生需要完成的写作一般分为Analytical Writing(分析写作),Argumentative Essay(议论文), 和Research Paper(研究论文)三种,不同的写作形式侧重对学生不同学科和知识面的考察。

        Research Paper一般是针对社科类主题的写作,主要考察学生的逻辑能力、理性思维能力,因此写作也要求更加具有客观性和条理性。

        今天Meeloun小编跟大家分享一下从美国高中生写Research Paper过程中可以获得的一些写作技巧。

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research paper写作

        1.选题要“思前想后”

        在选题时尽量选择自己了解或喜欢的方面,这样在写作时能至少保证进度是可以控制的,而且有能够支撑你一直写下去的热情和精力。因此。在有限的时间内,尽量避免过于技术或者专业的主题,如果实在拿不定主意可以多跟老师进行沟通。

        对已确定的主题的相关材料进行阅读时需要记下重点,将阅读过程中产生的想法做好笔记,其中包括写作的基本结构和想要提出的观点。

        2.讨论促进想法产生

        花一些时间与别人讨论,在与别人讨论的过程中,让别人更好地理解自己的观点、接受自己的主题。讨论可以让你写作的思路和观点更加明确、清晰。

        3.考虑你的读者

        写作牢记这一点:你是为读者写的。你的读者主要包括老师和同学。所以想想他们对你写作的期望,考虑一下他们对你所写的主题的了解程度。另外,也应该考虑到他们所知道的可能与你所知道的不同,所以想一想如何能够清晰地解释你的观点。

        4.自己写的文章至少要读五遍

        检查写作的内容不仅仅是纠正语法或拼写错误问题,而是使文章更加容易阅读和理解。因此,应该做好在必要时进行大量修改的准备。

        通过反复阅读,问问自己句子是否有意义、是否与主题相关?是否在段落中添加了有价值的信息?确保你所写的内容都是有用的,如果没用可以删除,以保证文章的凝练。

留学生收到feedback后要如何做essay proofreading?

        相信很多留学生在国外留学期间写的essay都拿到过feedback吧!拿到feedback时是不是心都碎了。Don’t worry!都看过来。大家不能让教授读不懂你的Draft。如果你的论文中有大段大段的unclear,那么请试想一下教授会像国内的语言老师把你们unclear的英文句子还尽量用中文思维去理解,并给出差不多意思的英文例句吗?显然不可能,他们读不懂只会是一个大写的Unclear。。。那么你的内容他们会评估吗?绝对没这个可能!所以时至今日,说什么也晚了,但如果现在努力的话,亡羊补牢还为之不晚。具体应该怎么做呢?

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essay修改润色

首先Meeloun小编为大家列出以下几种情况!

        情况一:如果essay写作一点都不会的话(少于3个包括3个)

        1.步骤:首先把自己要说的所有话,每字每句编辑成中文打出来,自己先去翻译,然后再用谷歌翻译。(注:一定要用最简单的,最接近英语思维的说话方式去编辑中文,这样翻译出来的也就更准确)。Google翻译虽然有时候会出错,但是最简单的就是这个方法,并且简单的翻译一般都不会出错。

        2.解释:不要说语言班老师不让,用谷歌翻译出来的英文很古怪。重点是你现在连基本的表达都做不到,只能用google帮忙。你难道确定你比谷歌翻译的要优秀?虽然有时候谷歌翻译的英文会有古怪之处,但至少能看明白,而你写出来的东西的确不古怪,但貌似只有中国人能看的明白!教授根本看不懂。大家思考一下,是否自己会存在这样的问题!当然这不是最优的办法,如果你的水平真的还不错,的确不需要这么做!这个方法适合刚到国外不知道essay怎么的同学。

        情况二:对于essay一知半解。

        1.步骤:首先你要先把被标记的句子进行修改,改到自认为没有语法问题之后进行下一步。剩余没有标出来的段落一句一句想清楚中文自己重新翻译一遍。(如何翻译同上!)

        2.解释:大家千万不要自认为改好了,放在grammarly 里面也是100分了,就觉得语法一定没问题。那你真的是想多了!1.教授没标注的句子,基本算是OK,但还是要查一遍,以防教授看漏。2.教授标出来的所有语法问题改正它。3.教授标出的所有unclear的句子,就意味着这句话被判死刑了,一定是要重写的。

        情况三:有没有离题的段落,也有偏题的段落,还有些段落不知道在说什么。

        1.步骤:1. 把未离题的句子修改好。2. 不知道在说什么的段落意味着你的逻辑和内容都存在着一些问题,因此你要重新思考一下你的前后逻辑,以及你的essay是否符合该段落的要求。3.对完全离题的段落,每句话都要重写,另外所有unclear的句子也要重写。

        2.解释:修改方面同学千万不能掉以轻心,因为教授已经给你警告了,如果第二次交essay还不改的话基本过不了了!很多时候同学们稍微一疏忽,有些地方没有改完,就会导致最后essay成绩不及格。