essay到底应该怎么写？为什么很多留学生写的essay用了很多高级词汇，还是个C, 而隔壁老王用的词汇是小学生都认识的，却是个A？导致同学们后面完成essay写作时看到题目，脑子里一篇空白。别担心，不仅仅只有你一个人有问题，你的同学也有很多不了解的！为了解决同学们的问题，Meeloun小编精选了几本essay 写作宝典！同学们可根据自身的实际水平选择参考，

        基础扫盲款

        On Writing Well

        这本书对各种题材的写作做了全面的扫盲，包含采访、游记、传记、科学科技、日常工作、体育、文艺批评和评论等。作者还提供了他作为一名作家对写作自身的观察和思考。我们拿英文Email的写作来举一个例子，在写英文Email时，不仅要注意语法词汇的应用是否正确得体，还需要注意给不同收件人时达到的效果。在business writing 课程里面，会有专门的部分是让你以boss, manager, customer和supervisor的身份来讲述同一件事情， 那个时候你就能体会到“一人分饰几角”的酸爽啦 ！

        基础高配版

        The Elements of Style

        The Elements of Style是各大北美高校人文学科课堂上的必备书籍，也逐渐成为每一个出国留学者必备的英文写作指南。

        这本书阐述的英文写作必须满足的基本原则和常见的错误。书中包括8个“基本使用规则”，10个“创作的基本原则”，“一些形式的问题”，一个包含49个易误用的单词和表达，57个易拼错的单词的列表，对于学习英语写作的学生来说非常实用。

        进阶版

        Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer

        这也是一本将写作技巧拆成单元来讲解的书。虽然书名叫做写作工具，但是每一个章节都相对独立，是围绕某一个英文essay写作技巧而设计的workshop。全书分为四个板块，nuts and bolts （英语写作的基本元素，词语、句子、段落的技巧）；special effects （让文章简练、清晰、有说服力的技巧）；blue prints （文章整体构思和结构）；useful habits （如何养成良好的英文写作习惯）。

        本书作者Roy Peter Clark是一个具有丰富教学经验的作家。这本书浓缩了他数十年以来的教学经验，并且大量地从文学作品中援引了超过200个以上的例子，将其转化为50项写作技巧。

        看到这里，相信你的装备已经不少啦！辣么，可以拿出拖延了一个星期的作业来开始做了么？如果是时间问题的话，同学们可以找我们Meeloun的essay代写服务哦！美伦现旗下写手超过400名，海龟硕博占据50%以上，更多写手资源正在火热招募中。美伦以质量为根本，诚信服务，严格执行双重审稿与检测，保证每一篇稿子都是精心原创并符合学科的需求，保障了留学生论文作业的通过率。

        下面Meeloun小编为大家整理一篇优秀的essay代写范文- Prevention and control of air pollution in Britain，供大家参考学习，这篇论文讨论了英国大气污染的防治。1952年发生的伦敦烟雾事件，是英国20世纪十大环境公害事件之一。自此之后，英国政府通过完善相关法制、强化公众参与、重视经济手段构建出一个具有鲜明特色的英国大气污染防治模式，有效地改善了环境空气质量。英国大气环境相关法律不仅体系完备，且范围广泛，涵盖了大气污染和尾气排放的方方面面。

        The 1952 London smog incident was one of the top 10 environmental hazards of the 20th century. Since then, the British government has effectively improved the environmental air quality by improving relevant legal system, strengthening public participation and emphasizing economic means to construct a distinctive British air pollution prevention model.

        Britain is the first industrialized country in the world and also the first country to encounter environmental pollution incidents. In the 1950s, due to industrial production and residents living in London burning a large amount of coal and excessive emission of soot, the “London smog event” shocked the world, resulting in tens of thousands of deaths due to respiratory diseases, making this event one of the top 10 environmental pollution events in the 20th century. Since then, the British government from these mistakes and by taking effective measures to control the coal combustion, reducing emissions, now the air pollution has been brought under effective control, environment quality has been fundamental to improve, but also accumulated a lot of experience of the prevention and control of atmospheric pollution, these experiences and lessons for guangdong governance haze weather brings a lot of enlightenment and reference.

        After the London smog incident, the British government attached great importance to legislation to solve the problem of air pollution. Similar to China, the UK also adopted “terminal treatment” to deal with air pollution in the early stage. The city of London act was introduced in 1954 to control smog emissions. In 1956, the Clean Air Act, the world’s first air pollution prevention and control act, was enacted, spreading the London governance model to the whole country. The law on industrial environmental health and safety stipulates that all polluting enterprises must take effective measures to prevent poisonous gases from being discharged into the atmosphere, or be severely punished. The air pollution control act provides for the right of the public to complain about environmental quality and limits on sulphur content in industrial fuels. These measures have effectively reduced soot and sulfur dioxide pollution from coal burning. In the 1970s, traffic pollution replaced industrial pollution as the primary threat to London’s air quality. Therefore, the government introduced a series of measures, including prioritizing the development of public transport, curbing the number of private cars and reducing vehicle exhaust emissions, to seek to improve the city’s air quality. In the 1990 s, the British began to seek to improve air environmental quality comprehensive measures, introduced the road vehicle lass, the Clean Air Act, the environmental law, the greater London government act, the pollution prevention and control act, and the climate change act, and a series of air pollution prevention and control act, to strict constraints of other emissions, setting clear penalties, to control the air pollution. At the same time, according to the environmental law issued in 1995, the UK began to formulate a national air quality strategy, stipulating that all cities should carry out air quality evaluation and review. For areas that fail to meet the standard, the government must set aside an air quality management area and force them to meet the standard within a specified period. Britain then suggested action plan for energy efficiency: the government, “the climate change action plan”, “the sustainable development strategy”, “low carbon building plan”, “tax and subsidy scheme”, “the British energy efficiency action plan 2007”, the national renewable energy plan, and the low carbon transition plan and a series of plans and policy, actively improve the air environmental quality.

        The UK’s air environment laws are comprehensive and wide-ranging, covering all aspects of air pollution and emissions. It can be said that the process of air pollution control in the UK is a process of constant revision and improvement of relevant laws and regulations.

        British citizens have a deep tradition of autonomy and strong social roots in the discussion, decision-making, supervision and implementation of environmental issues. The UK pays attention to protecting the public’s right to know about the environment through legislation, and is the first country to inform the public of the real-time information of air governance. The official network publishes real-time air quality data for the London area, as well as hourly concentrations and weekly trends for individual pollutants. Nor is there an official monopoly on the way British citizens receive information about the air. Citizens can request data directly from government environmental agencies under the freedom of information act and should not be denied access. The government’s UK air quality archive website and the London air quality network, a collaboration between civil society organisations and the king’s college London environmental group, publish real-time air quality data for the London area. The government will never dare to accuse non-governmental monitoring organizations of being “illegal”, “illegal” or “unscientific”.

        The UK not only attaches importance to achieving the goal of environmental governance through mandatory laws, but also attaches importance to promoting voluntary emission reduction by enterprises through economic means. Economic means to emphasize “who pollution, who management, who spend money”, besides can increase government financial income and economic measures compared to the traditional administrative commands have continuous stimulation effect, through the internalization of environment cost, encourage people to adopt a more effective way to reduce environmental pollution, reduce pollutant amount, gradually formed voluntary governance reducing the pollution of the environment. Since the 1970s, the British government began to reduce the cost of environmental governance and improve the efficiency of environmental governance by levying environmental taxes, trading emission rights and introducing preferential tax policies. As a means of economic intervention, fiscal and taxation measures have obvious effects on improving the environmental quality of Britain.

        Science and technology have played a key guiding role in Britain’s fight against air pollution. The British government encourages enterprises to adopt the air pollution control technology to reform the production process, giving priority to the non-pollution or less pollution process, which is the fundamental way to prevent and control the air pollution. At the government level, the government actively organizes, guides and enterprises to adopt advanced production techniques. Through economic means to promote the voluntary adoption of advanced technology emission reduction enterprises to achieve internalization of environmental costs; By means of public participation and social incentives, enterprises are forced to eliminate outdated technologies and actively adopt better emission reduction technologies.

        论如何快速成为老司机——

        这些网站你不能不知道！

        嘿嘿

        Monash学生必知的网址

        图书馆

        官网： https://www.monash.edu/library

        数据库：http://guides.lib.monash.edu/subject-databases

        技巧：https://www.monash.edu/rlo/research-writing-assignments

        图书馆应该是每位学生最有力的学习助手了吧。每每临近考试都是一位难求，不过如果用不到馆内设施，还可以多多利用网上资源呀。在图书馆的官网上，你可以看到丰富的资源和信息，还有不少与学习有关的小技巧。初到国外留学的同学们，如果想尽快适应本地的教育氛围，通过学习图书馆提供的学习技巧是一个不错的方法。

        比如：Reading and note taking —

        https://www.monash.edu/rlo/study-skills/reading-and-note-taking

        另外，大家还可以直接预约图书馆的房间哦，适合3人以上组团学习，这样就不用担心去的晚而找不到座位啦

        http://monash.libcal.com/booking

        寒/暑假课程

        https://www.monash.edu/enrolments/processes/summer-winter/faculty

        如果假期想要更充实的话，可以提前了解一下学校提供的假期课程。不仅可以修到学分，还能在假期也持续自我充电，保持输入。假期后开学也可以快速回到学习状态哦~

        语言辅导

        官网：https://www.monash.edu/english-connect

        这是一个互动式的语言项目，由经过训练的学生与参加者一起练习英语，可以说是多功能英语角。这里的项目主要包括说和写两个方面，对于需要做presentation和交essay/report的同学有一定的帮助。

        机房的off-hour通行许可

        网址：https://locate-a-lab.apps.monash.edu

        对于一些专业，比如设计、建筑、IT等，如果在off-hour也想要使用学校机房的电脑来做assignment的话，只要在这个网址上开通学生卡的通行权就可以刷卡进入啦。非常简单！

        使用学校打印机

        https://web-print.monash.edu/app

        学校教学楼和图书馆都分布着打印机，非常便利。想要使用的话，一种方法是通过学校的电脑，直接点击打印即可；另外如果想用自己的电脑连接打印机，则需要通过上面的链接提交想打印的文件。然后只要到离自己最近的任意打印机，刷卡或者输入学生账号与密码，就可以打印啦。

        志愿者

        官网：https://www.monash.edu/volunteer

        如果你希望成为一名志愿者，想要通过参与志愿者活动更快融入本地生活，不妨看一看这里。也许你就能碰到感兴趣的项目！大胆地试一下吧，成为一名志愿者不仅能够帮助他人，还可以增长自己的阅历，也为简历添上明亮的一笔。

        跟着美国人学申请essay写作最大的好处是，我们无论如何不可能比美国本土的人更了解美国大学，更了解美国大学的要求，更了解美国大学的文化，更了解美国大学的录取的“潜规则”！

申请essay写作

        就比如美研申请中的个人陈述，你翻遍所有的美国大学的官网，你会发现一个问题，在国内叫的最多的“个人陈述”，在美国大学的官网上会有不同的叫法，见得最多的是“Personal Statement”，但你也会看到“Letter of Intent”，或者“Statement of Purpose”，在严谨的美国人看来，这些是不同的，虽然他们写作的内容上会有类似的地方，但essay写作要求和essay格式会有很大的不同，作用也有一些差别。

        下面Meeloun小编就和同学们一起看看美国人是如何写作一份完美的申请essay写作的！

        Graduate school applications often require a letter of intent, personal statement, or similar essay. These may highlight your personality, interests, accomplishments, and goals, as they relate to what you want to study and why you want to attend that school to do it.

        Writing a personal statement for grad school could be one of your biggest opportunities. You can use it to show the school who you are and why they should consider your application. Because it’s something of a first impression, it’s important to make sure your essay is thought out, well organized, and well written. Here are some tips for creating a standout application essay or letter of intent for graduate school.

        What Is the Difference Between a Letter of Intent and Personal Statement?

        The first step in writing an effective application essay is identifying exactly what you’re meant to be writing. Is your application asking you for a letter of intent, a personal statement, or a statement of purpose? Or are they asking for more than one of these? The basic content of each option is similar. They all talk about your intention to study at that school, and why you might be a good fit. Despite these similarities, there are some key differences which should guide your approach to composing them.

        Letter of Intent: A letter of intent, or letter of interest, is like a cover letter. It’s a formal letter, ideally addressed to the decision-maker regarding your application. The goal of a letter of intent for graduate school is to provide an overview of your goals in applying, highlights of your experience, and why you’d be a good fit. You’d probably also want to close with a call to action.

        Graduate Personal Statement: Rather than a letter, a personal statement for graduate school is an essay. It’s intended to show who you are as a person, your personal and academic goals, and why you might be a good fit for the program. An important distinction here is “who you are as a person.” Personal statements should speak to what you want to study and why. But you’ll probably want to frame it as a personal narrative that helps the reader get to know you as an individual.

        Statement of Purpose: The biggest difference between a statement of purpose and a personal statement is the intent. While also an essay, a statement of purpose generally focuses specifically on your reasons for applying to a program. The content should focus on the program itself and the specific achievements and experience that make you a good candidate. A statement of purpose could also be known as a graduate school statement of intent, a goal statement for graduate school, or an academic goals essay.

        While some programs may only ask for one of these pieces, it’s possible that your selected school might want a few of them. If you’re asked for a personal statement and a statement of purpose, it’s important to think what makes each one different. One strategy to make it a little easier could be to delineate between your “personal” and “academic” achievements. For example, you could write your statement of purpose about the academic and professional experience that makes you a good candidate for that program. Your personal statement might focus on the personal experiences that shaped your character, and led you to choosing that field and that school.

        Getting Ready To Write Your Graduate School Application Essay

        When you’re getting ready to write your personal essay, you will first need to think about a few key points.

        1、Your Purpose in Writing Your Essay

        In other words, what are you trying to tell your reader about yourself and your goals? Make sure you have a clear message.

        2、What You Want to Say

        Think about the kinds of details, or the type of story you want to tell to achieve your purpose. Do you have a specific experience you want to describe, or certain achievements you need to share? How do these details support your message?

        3、The Style You’ll Use to Write It

        Sometimes, schools might look for a certain style of writing, such as a scholarly voice. However, in other cases, you might have a little bit of wiggle room. This is your chance to show your target school that you’re a competent, engaging writer with personality. Thinking about your strategy in advance could help you do that.

        All of this should be informed by the particular school you’re writing the essay for. So before you begin, be sure to read the essay requirements carefully, and research the school and the program in question.

        Formatting Your Personal Statement for Graduate School

        Thinking about how you’ll structure your essay early on could be an advantage when it comes to writing and revising. One good way to do this could be by drafting an outline of your ideas. By doing this, you could make sure your ideas are organized effectively, and see how it all fits together, even before you start writing.

        Chances are you learned the basics of essay structure in high school. But in case you’re out of practice—for example, if you spent the last few years knee deep in math or computer science—here’s a refresher.（划重点：比较搞笑，中美如此的相似，高中议论文的写作结构在这里可以用到）

        Introduction

        Anywhere from a sentence to a paragraph, the introduction creates context for the reader. Generally speaking, it should provide an overview of the topics you’ll be discussing. But, depending upon the style of your essay, it could also serve as a dramatic lead-in, setting the stage for a story you’ll be telling..

        Body

        The body of personal statement, will likely consist of two to four paragraphs. These paragraphs should be sequenced logically – one should naturally flow from the next – and contain the bulk of the essay’s important information. Usually, these paragraphs will begin with a “topic sentence” summarizing the paragraph’s content, but again that may not apply if your statement has a more narrative style.

        Conclusion

        Rather than introducing new ideas or supportive arguments, the conclusion is where you tie it all together. Close out your essay by making clear what your argument is and what you want the reader to take away from it.

        If you’re writing a letter of intent, the above should still apply. However, you’ll need to do this as a formal letter. That should include a header containing the date, the recipient’s name and address, your name and address, and a salutation, as well as a closing and signature.

        How Long Should a Personal Statement for Graduate School Be?

        While every school will have its own requirements, generally a personal statement should fall between 250 and 750 words. This is roughly one half to one full page.

        First, double check to see if the school provides specific guidelines. If they don’t, then try to be as clear and succinct as possible while still answering the question. Does your personal statement cover all the key points? Is it clear what you are trying to say? Did you repeat yourself? If your answers are yes, yes and student, personal statement for graduate schoolno, then your personal essay is likely the right length.

        Writing Style For Your Personal Statement（划重点：个性化很重要）

        In addition to telling the school about yourself and your goals, a personal essay demonstrates your writing ability to your school. As such, you’ll want to put your best foot forward with an effective writing style. Here are some tips to consider while you write.

        Strike a balance between personal and professional.

        You might be talking about yourself, but you’re also writing to a graduate school, so it’s important to show that you can write formally. Try and be direct, clear, and organized, to help your reader follow easily. Don’t stray from your topic, and watch your grammar and punctuation! That said, this essay is about you, so don’t be afraid to write in first person.（划重点：第一人称写作）

        Be engaging.

        Keep your reader interested through your style choices. For example, sticking with active verbs when possible and avoiding passive voice could help enliven your writing. Strong imagery or concrete examples could also make an impression that lasts. And using a conversational tone (but not too informal!) could help personalize it for the reader.

        Be accurate.

        You want your reader to be interested, but make sure everything you write is true! Avoid embellishing or inventing stories, and stick to facts that could be substantiated.（划重点：真实性）

        Follow the rules.

        Your school might have specific guidelines for how you write and submit your personal essay. Make sure you follow them to a tee! When in doubt, be conservative, and stick with a traditional font choice (12 pt. Times New Roman) and paper (white). Also make sure you’re spelling names correctly, and using the right credentials and terminology when talking about your target school.（划重点：字体字号以及文字背景）

        Editing Your Graduate School Application Essay

        One of the most important aspects of the writing process is revision. Don’t be surprised if this takes more than one draft to do! Many writers revise over several rounds before settling on a finished product. Here’s a brief guide on the revision process and what to look for.

        Work from big to small.

        Before worrying about individual words and sentences, make sure the big issues are covered. Start with things like your ideas, the clarity of your argument, and your overall structure and fix those first.

        Check your message.

        Think back to the beginning of this process, to the message you decided you wanted to get across. Is your essay or letter communicating that message? Is it clear? If you’re not sure, consider having somebody else read it over.

        Check your organization.

        If you started with an outline, compare your finished draft to your original outline. Is your essay organized the way you planned? If so, read through it and make sure that it makes sense and has a logical flow.

        Make sure your paragraphs make sense.

        Each paragraph should have a clear topic or message, and support for that topic. Make sure it’s clear what each paragraph is trying to say, and that each one is organized.

        Check your style.

        Double check to make sure your tone isn’t too casual. If you included any slang, for example, now is the time to remove it. Then check your sentence structure. Avoid fragments and run-on sentences, and make sure to vary your sentence structure to keep the reader engaged. Try and remove any instances of passive voice, when you can. Reading your essay aloud could be one way to catch any awkward writing you might have missed.（划重点：不要卖弄你的美语有多厉害，别让招生官更容易理解你的文字更重要）

        Fix your grammar and punctuation

        This is the last and possibly most important step. Make sure you catch any errors in grammar and punctuation. Pay careful attention to common errors, like mixing up your/you’re, and there/their/they’re. Also make sure to check your subject/verb agreement, number agreement, capitalization, and punctuation. Finally, double check spelling, especially when it comes to important names. One strategy to avoid missing anything is to read your essay backwards, starting with the final sentence. That will help force your brain to focus on each individual sentence, instead of skimming over mistakes by accident.

        Final Advice

        Writing personal statement for graduate school is only one piece of the application puzzle. But it’s more than that. It’s an opportunity to show your chosen school your writing expertise, your passion for your subject, and who you are as a person. Keep in mind what the application is asking you for and what you’re trying to tell them. Take time to edit carefully, and your essay could potentially set your application apart.

        英国留学生在完成essay写作前最好去了解一些需要了解的注意事项，比如时间的规划，又或者是作业的具体要求是怎样，又或是其抄袭等等等等。不要拿到题目就急冲冲的下笔或者放在一边不管。为使大家能够更加好的了解这些，Meeloun小编在这里给大家总结了英国essay的写作注意事项，下面一起来看看吧！

essay写作

        抓紧时间准备

        你应该开始努力尝试尽早完成你生活中的其他事情，为完成essay留出足够的时间去思考，去写。第一步就是要集中时间和精力全力去写essay，即使它只是完成了一个简短的封面，这样你也会觉得很有成就感。然后接下的内容也要这样去写，专心，专注。

        了解作业的要求是什么

        在写之前仔细阅读作业要求，如果你能读明白作业的要求固然便是更好。如果你不确定，然后问你的同学，你会惊奇地发现很多人都会像你一样不确定！或者问问你的指导老师，只是为了安全起见，保证自己的作业不会写偏题，这样写出来的作业就会符合题目要求。

        组织研究内容

        当你阅读和研究的课题，养成了一种习惯，注意突出写作重点。下笔的时候考虑你将如何用连贯的表达形式把这些结合起来。

        养成写草稿的习惯

        如果觉得自己语言组织方面能力不是很好，可以先把想到的内容用草稿的方式写下来，然后再慢慢试着将它们连贯起来。久了之后你会发现这个习惯会帮你解决很多麻烦。

        要有足够的证据

        你要找到足够的引用材料的来源或研究来支撑你说你在文章中提出的论点。

        千万不要抄袭

        这是国外学术界的大忌，特别是在英国。一旦发现有抄袭的嫌疑后果不堪设想。可以引用别人的内容或者文献，但是一定要在文章的reference的部分中展现出来。

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